Kamis, 20 November 2014

2nd. Developing the topic sentence into paragraph


By : Fadhil sam

  1. Topic sentence : Effective teachers possess specific qualities that help students achieve greater result.
        Effective teachers possess specific qualities that help students achieve greater result. One of the reason is effective teachers know the best learning style for the students. So it’s clear if the students are comfortable and understand well with the lesson that the teacher explains in their learning process. In addition, effective teachers also have broader orientation in developing students potential, they are able to produce students who are strong and ready to face the challenges and changes that great also. And the last, they are able to interact with the students. The jaunty teachers who are patient and friendly always create a warm atmosphere in the classroom, so that most of students taught are able to get their point easily.

2. Topic sentence : It has been shown that attending college can aid students in having a better quality of life.
       It has been shown that attending college can aid students in having a better quality of life. That’s because campus is a suitable place to learn everything, from theory until practice. And we don’t need to be afraid to experiment with anything, in contrast with working where we are required to never make mistakes. On the other hand, attending college can also help you to have an extensive network and to build good relationship with others, which allow you to to get many job vacancies that make our life better, especially in the business world. And the most important, attending college also helps our insight and experience increased definitely, either  from the academic or non-academic side. Not only experienced in the campus, but also out of campus, all aspects of experiences we can get in attending college.

Sabtu, 01 November 2014

1st. Cellphone can disturb student attention

By : Fadhil sam

      Cellphone can disturb student attention in the classroom. Its sophisticated and interesting of cellphone is one of the main cause why cellphone commonly used by many students when they are studying. Morever it provides lots of aplication and social network, such as : facebook, twitter, instagram, path and other reputable games which always become their favourite activity everywhere and everywhen they feel bored. In addition, Cellphone is a simple tool to communicate each other.  So they are often busy with calls, messages, and miscall. Weither from their closest friend, girlfriend, ex-girlfriend, and also their parents. Finally, they can find everything on phone weither the adventages or disadventages, it depends on their desire.